A great read, Jodi, and funny throughout - I enjoyed hearing your enthusiasm as you read - punchy delivery :-)

I love this!! Also love the differing voices.

Bwahaha...no openings for male superheroes unless you're a vampire but lots of openings for females. Brilliant!

Thanks Ben and Jen (oooo - that rhymes!) I actually had lots of fun with this story and look forward to playing and tweaking it further. I was lucky enough to have a good chunk of dialogue download while in the shower this morning and raced to get it down..

Glad you both enjoyed it... and Jen - go the multiple layers.

This made me laugh :) Great reading! And what story.

Bravo! I liked the twist at the end and the she-hero is a very interesting character. I'd like to hear more about him/her