Hiya Icy, just happened to come across you avatar as I was downloading my first ever Spoken Sunday. Loved that. I didn't explain my own flash, just started reading it.
I guess I've got a bit of a problem since my natural dialect IS to speak fast. Geordies are kind of known for it. Shall do my best to slow down next time though.
great little flash fiction. given this is your first spoken sunday of your own work - you have done fantastically - I know only too well the *terror* of chomping at the bit and rushing the words as you read. However, the pace - though fast - fits the style of the fiction... urging you onward - like the hot rods and young men proving their masculinity.