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Such a sad and familiar scene. You paint it really well. I feel so sorry for him.
jen_b
almost 2 years ago
David - I remember this story from your blog. I like it - its a very powerful statement about war. My only comment would be to slow down your delivery a bit and add a bit more emotion to the reading. You have a terrific voice, though :-)
pjkaiser
almost 2 years ago
