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Thanks, Jen and PJ. This is a flash version of the opening to my second novel. Different, but captures the essence.
Dracotorre
almost 2 years ago
Nice recording, David. This is an interesting piece - is it part of a longer work? It leaves me wanting to know more. Very cool with great images
pjkaiser
almost 2 years ago
The descriptions of shadows, light, sounds--all so spooky. Once again you're the master of great details. This is a snapshot of a tense moment and you do it justice.
jen_b
almost 2 years ago
