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The twitch that bothered her daughter for all the wrong reasons... I love prose that says a lot with a little. Great work.
ganymeder123
almost 2 years ago
Laughed at the rolls of fat not being dissolved by breastfeeding like everyone said it would - I know all about that! And is it wrong to wish for a second, more cataclysmic stroke? I really enjoyed this story - and the prompt Jodi :)
LilyMulholland
almost 2 years ago
Great to hear you read again, Jodi. I think this piece is just the right length & tone for it. There's so much going on underneath. I'm going to check out the prompt.
jen_b
almost 2 years ago
