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Excerpt 1 Raven Memory

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almost 3 years ago
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Dracotorre

Read along on Scribd: http://www.scribd.com/doc/35563684/Raven-Memory-Sample

Dracotorre almost 3 years ago

Dracotorre

Thanks, Catherine. Nice to hear.

Dracotorre almost 3 years ago

ganymeder123

I listened to all your boos yesterday. You did a great job reading and I really enjoyed them!

ganymeder123 almost 3 years ago

Dracotorre

Thanks, PJ and Jen. Reading slowly requires concentration, and my mind wanders between words. Practice makes perfect. Breaking a novel into such a tiny segment seems strange, but we'll see how it goes after another segment.

Dracotorre almost 3 years ago

jen_b

You have colour, light, sound, all the senses awake right away at the start of the story. I'd like more dialogue but I think that's just because like PJ I'd like to know more about what's going on. It's a very intriguing beginning.

jen_b almost 3 years ago

pjkaiser

David - this is an intriguing start to your novel. You read it a bit fast but it still seems very cool, it raises a lot of questions which is good. I'd like to read more.

pjkaiser almost 3 years ago