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Read along on Scribd: http://www.scribd.com/doc/35563684/Raven-Memory-Sample
Dracotorre
almost 2 years ago
Thanks, Catherine. Nice to hear.
Dracotorre
almost 2 years ago
I listened to all your boos yesterday. You did a great job reading and I really enjoyed them!
ganymeder123
almost 2 years ago
Thanks, PJ and Jen. Reading slowly requires concentration, and my mind wanders between words. Practice makes perfect. Breaking a novel into such a tiny segment seems strange, but we'll see how it goes after another segment.
Dracotorre
almost 2 years ago
You have colour, light, sound, all the senses awake right away at the start of the story. I'd like more dialogue but I think that's just because like PJ I'd like to know more about what's going on. It's a very intriguing beginning.
jen_b
almost 2 years ago
David - this is an intriguing start to your novel. You read it a bit fast but it still seems very cool, it raises a lot of questions which is good. I'd like to read more.
pjkaiser
almost 2 years ago