3.25.
You said most part of the details, so the delivery was good, but the grammar needs some corrections like, the name why....we call it Amazonas. The original inhabitants GAVE this name because...AMAZUNU, which means...
Instead of however you could have said Moreover or futhermore because you are talking about another source of the name no constrasting the idea.
Finally you say: These two sources GAVE the name amazonas...
In this passages decribes the name why do we call Amazonas. It is about two sources. One is it original native name and the other one is the chronicle name writing by the europeans.
The first sources explain that this huge river is located in South America, and the native inhabitantes given this name because of the original of name "Amazun" means huge wave.
However, the most important sorce in the 16 century, they said it also is remarkable comparitive female warior called amazone in the great literature which contribute it to the name ot the river name AMAZONAS.This two sources given the name Amazones as a Huge river.
3.25.
You said most part of the details, so the delivery was good, but the grammar needs some corrections like, the name why....we call it Amazonas. The original inhabitants GAVE this name because...AMAZUNU, which means...
Instead of however you could have said Moreover or futhermore because you are talking about another source of the name no constrasting the idea.
Finally you say: These two sources GAVE the name amazonas...
tatydupin over 1 year ago
In this passages decribes the name why do we call Amazonas. It is about two sources. One is it original native name and the other one is the chronicle name writing by the europeans.
The first sources explain that this huge river is located in South America, and the native inhabitantes given this name because of the original of name "Amazun" means huge wave.
However, the most important sorce in the 16 century, they said it also is remarkable comparitive female warior called amazone in the great literature which contribute it to the name ot the river name AMAZONAS.This two sources given the name Amazones as a Huge river.
eduardomaravi over 1 year ago