The reason give you a 2.25 for the grammar is not because there are a lot of mistakes, but because it is simple. No passive voice, adjective clauses, noun clauses...
According to the professor, (pause) in Alaska
long dayS
The conclusion would sound clearer and more complex like this:
Exposure to reduced sunlight causes reduced amounts of seratonin, which makes people sad, and increased amounts of melatonin, which makes people SLEEPY.
The reason give you a 2.25 for the grammar is not because there are a lot of mistakes, but because it is simple. No passive voice, adjective clauses, noun clauses...
davetoefl about 1 year ago
According to the professor, (pause) in Alaska
long dayS
The conclusion would sound clearer and more complex like this:
Exposure to reduced sunlight causes reduced amounts of seratonin, which makes people sad, and increased amounts of melatonin, which makes people SLEEPY.
Make sure you do the response in under 1:00
Topic Dev. 3.3
Grammar 2.25
Delivery 2.5 (low fluency)
Total 2.68| 19
Better! Good job!
davetoefl about 1 year ago