AnnieEvettThis is a taster into the Choose Your Online Adventures of Series One...its a first draft and I hope you like it! It can be read over here - http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2010/09/shore-leave.html
or check out CYOA here - http://chooseyouronlineadventures.com/
jen_bSuch a sad and familiar scene. You paint it really well. I feel so sorry for him.
pjkaiserDavid - I remember this story from your blog. I like it - its a very powerful statement about war. My only comment would be to slow down your delivery a bit and add a bit more emotion to the reading. You have a terrific voice, though :-)
jen_bSuch a sad and familiar scene. You paint it really well. I feel so sorry for him.
pjkaiserDavid - I remember this story from your blog. I like it - its a very powerful statement about war. My only comment would be to slow down your delivery a bit and add a bit more emotion to the reading. You have a terrific voice, though :-)
ganymederThe machine recording was a bit disconcerting and no link to the text to read along. I would have liked to hear you read it yourself. :)
Riveting story. Always read the fine print!
DracotorreThanks, Jen and PJ. This is a flash version of the opening to my second novel. Different, but captures the essence.
pjkaiserNice recording, David. This is an interesting piece - is it part of a longer work? It leaves me wanting to know more. Very cool with great images
jen_bThe descriptions of shadows, light, sounds--all so spooky. Once again you're the master of great details. This is a snapshot of a tense moment and you do it justice.
DracotorreThanks, Jen and PJ. This is a flash version of the opening to my second novel. Different, but captures the essence.
pjkaiserNice recording, David. This is an interesting piece - is it part of a longer work? It leaves me wanting to know more. Very cool with great images
jen_bThe descriptions of shadows, light, sounds--all so spooky. Once again you're the master of great details. This is a snapshot of a tense moment and you do it justice.
spare-shadeHi!
I hope that you may be to participate in this project.
"the act of listening is the act of inscribing” project explores the notions of home, poem and the human voice.
I am asking you to voice your home.
This can be many things, said in many different ways.
It can be a thought, a feeling, an emotion, a memory, a confusion, whatever it is that is housing your being now.
Or, it can simply be your sense of home - a feeling of being at home.
Maybe it is just a word, a poem, or a thought that is on your mind right now. It could be a broken dish in your sink. Or, a place, a situation you are in. It can be a worry that is preoccupying you, or an aspiration you are pursuing. It can be this moment, or a memory. It can be a ruin, or a broken home.
Whatever home is for you, or whatever houses your thoughts or brings you closer to home, or to this moment, please voice it.
Time is a commodity in great demand but rather limited and jealousy guarded supply, so I sincerely appreciate you sharing it.
And I would appreciate if you record home in your voice as an audio-boo – my account is http://audioboo.fm/spare-shade .
For complete information about this project please visit a spare shade of light http://spareshade.com/
Thank you,
ivan
PS. please free to forward this on.
AnnieEvettfor the rest of the story - check out http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2011/11/precipice.html